Monday, September 3, 2012

Stars in the sky

Today we watched A video clip for writing and this is my writing




One night only my uncle smith and old man gancines  took me on  a boat ride I climbed up a ladder onto the moon I put a Ancer in a giser I pulled the boat closer the old man gancines and uncel smith clibbed up the ladder then a shooting star came bing bang boom Then I touched it It went sming then the stars went clump clump and climed on each other and turnd alive And chased me off the moon. 

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