Writing

Once upon a time there was an old man in a blimp then he heard a sound (uuaa) he looked and he saw flying turtles he was Amazed . they went past just 2 where left he tryed getting one he got it the turtule it swinged around and around the rope broak just then a babby turtle came it stopped for him to jump on. it took him to misty iland.

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