Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, September 12, 2013

infering

  1. Can you infer what I am?


 I have big Sharp and scary teeth,  I am green sometimes, I scare people.

     2.  Can you infer What I am?

I am cute and cuddly, I am mans best friend, I can be tamed.

     3.  Can you infer what I am?

I am made of wood. I am made to draw, I come in different colours

Please answer as a comment.

Thursday, July 4, 2013

Writing


Once upon a time there was a hidden valley. In the valley there was a boy he could jump rivers and climb to the top of every tree in the valley and he could do lots of amazing things. He loves to eat fish and he loves to sit around the fire. One day when he was sitting around the fire a wolf came. The villagers said "run!!!!!" 
"NO!!!" the boy said "they are attracted to things that run. So wait and see what they do. If they attack, get your weapon and attack them back but you must not die. Now get your weapons." We got our pet bears and attacked. 


10 minutes later


We have won!!!


to be continued.....


Thursday, June 20, 2013

Volcano city

Once upon a time there lived a boy that lived in a city of hot boiling magma.
Suddenly he heard a bang and a boom and then he saw what the big bang was.... it was a dinosaur. "Run!" they said, but  the dinosars were actually good. "Ok"  they said "Do you want a ride"and he replied "of course" and they all lived hapily ever after.

Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Splish,splosh,splash

Splish,splash,splosh

ripples ripples every where splashing sploshing in the air.
splish splosh splash rocking like a crate on a ship.
water is wavy like the sea making me sea sick 123.

Thursday, October 18, 2012

Explanation writing

HOW Milk Get From The Cow To The Super Market


The Calf drinks it mothers milk until it is older enough to eat hay and grass. Cows don't have milk until they are about two years old when they have a baby. Milk goes through pipes and is stored in a refrigerated tank . Then a tanker truck comes to pick it up . The milk gets tested  the n it goes into a room called a freeze room ( I think it Might be cold in there) then it goes into bottles which is put in the super market.


Monday, September 3, 2012

Stars in the sky

Today we watched A video clip for writing and this is my writing




One night only my uncle smith and old man gancines  took me on  a boat ride I climbed up a ladder onto the moon I put a Ancer in a giser I pulled the boat closer the old man gancines and uncel smith clibbed up the ladder then a shooting star came bing bang boom Then I touched it It went sming then the stars went clump clump and climed on each other and turnd alive And chased me off the moon. 

Thursday, August 23, 2012

Writing



OMG that slide is humongous it looks like fun I'm going to go down because it at lest it has balls to stop me then he went down when he landed in the balls he got taken to a new planet he named it planet Zoorlock it was all spikey I ran into one it hurt.
suddenly alien's came dadadadada I'm going to dye but they thought I was there marster so I stay there for the rest of my life.

the end


Thursday, June 21, 2012

How chocolate is made

Chocolate  is made by one little flower.The flower get pollinated by a small insect called a midge. Fruit pods start to grow and it takes 6 months.The pods have to be cut by hand.When you open the pods and you will see cacao beans.The cacao beans go into a small box and they are left to ferment. Then they are put into a bigger box to dry in the sun.
Then the seeds are roasterd for 3 hours. The seeds are grounded with sugar into cocoa powder.
The powder is melted to chocolate on the heat. Then the choclate in put into moulds.
Now you have chocolate

Thursday, May 31, 2012

flying frogs

One quiet Tuesday evening,around 8pm,I started to float on my Lilly pad randomly I flew in to other peoples houses  over roofs and I went in to 1 persons house I changed the channel with my tongue on the remote. 
The air is making a swishing sound like a ghost suddenly I flouted into a white sheet that was on  the washing line.
 I was a ghost next Minuit it slided down around to my neck now I'm super man. I was going so fast I started to turn purple I was so cold .

so I landed on the lake to warm up then I saw my friends land.Now I'm bored I said To my friends I really want to do that again What should I do now. Neck minute I saw flying pigs.Pigs my friends said.Yes pigs.

This is my draft piece of writing. Can you please make a comment so I can make my writing even better?

Thursday, February 2, 2012

All about me

My name is Ashton. Age-7. My favourite thing is food. My favourite thing about school is friends. Best colour is orange. My family is Louise-Lawrence-Dylan-Ashton me. My Hobbies are soccer and cricket. I have this quality- I am good at running.